Today I would like to expand on the notes I put in the assignment sheet for the 2Synthesis paper in regard to organizing the paper. Here is the first step (see the 2Syn Assignment).
Start the paper off . . .
1) by providing a summary of the new document in terms of the ideas you have already generated from reading the old document,
Notes and an example: Look to the old document first and to the mindmap that you are creating for this assignment. Ask yourself what the four or five most important ideas are that you have found while comparing the old document with the new. Take the Race topic and the idea of nonviolence in both word and deed as an example. [Note: This idea was only reach after 1) the comparison between the two topics was made which indicates that the you will need to do the comparison first, then 2) come up with the idea, and finally, 3) revise the comparison to conform to the idea you arrived at after the first step.]
Ida Wells writes at the end of the 19th c about the scourge of lynching in the South. The first idea that comes to mind is racial violence--the violence one race perpetrates on another because they consider the other race, in this case Blacks, as Other. They have rationalized that if Blacks are hurt or killed, it doesn't matter because they are not part of our community; they are not citizens like we are: they are below us in every way.
Wells on the other hand, writes with the full consciousness of someone who considers Blacks as having all the human rights of other residents of the South. She writes in a way that is lucid, objective, and straight forward. It is important to think about the way she writes because that has a lot to do with why she was not banned or harassed by Whites and why she was seemingly accepted by Blacks who read her writing. She is entirely reasonable while what she writes about is entirely out of the pale of human behavior. She convinces her readers by her calm and objective reporting that what she says is true and what she describes is horrific. [Note: A study of the reception of Wells’s rhetoric would be an appropriate topic for the 3Research Project.]
These are just a few of the ideas--Blacks as Other and Wells's rhetoric--that you now have to think in terms of the new document. In the early 1960s Blacks were still considered Other because . . . ? And here you would try to give us the ways they were still not looked up as equal with Whites in the South. Not only are they not equal but there is still the vestiges of the hatred you saw in Wells. Give those examples from the new document. And as far as a connection to Wells's rhetoric what about the aspect of non-violence that is apparent in the Freedom Riders? This idea connects to the way Wells writes: the way she does not offer violence for violence, hatred for hatred, but instead presents a reasoned voice that appears above the angry emotions of the time yet zeros in on the violent behavior of Whites. She doesn't accuse all Whites but instead gives example after example of what actually happened, thus putting individual names and faces to the crimes. [Note: You must give support from the documents for these assertions]
In the new document, you can see that the Freedom Riders use of non-violence has the same effect as Wells’s writing but this time it’s not just one person confronting the crimes against Blacks but many, many people and instead of just writing about these crimes, they have gone in and done something about them. In the mode of Wells, they don't react to violence with violence but offer their bodies instead as a way to force white people to consider them as equal.
This moderate, reasoned reaction to violence by the Freedom Riders has its roots so to speak in Wells's approach to lynching. She writes provocatively about what actually happens, daring those who read her to oppose her, but they can't because there is nothing but facts there to support her views. The Freedom Riders also are taken seriously after a while because they present an objective and non-confrontational aspect to the violence and discrimination they see.
The differences (and here comes the synthesis) between Wells and the Freedom Riders has to do with Wells writing to a primarily Black audience that at least initially was like "preaching to the choir". They knew what was happening but what is not fully known is how her pamphlets were read by concerned Whites of the time. It is clear, however, that she did not and could not put her own life at risk for this cause as the Freedom Riders did in the 1960s. It is logical to assume that if Wells was present at a lynching and protested what was going on, she probably would have been lynched also. At the time Wells was writing, there were none of the most elemental safe guards for Blacks from those who would harm them. They only survived by being submissive.
By the 1960s this need for Blacks to be submissive had waned primarily because there were many more Blacks inside and outside the South who had a certain power that protected them. They were still confronted by the Jim Crow laws but many had risen to middle-class status. But they wanted more. The slow reforms of previous decades were not enough. They wanted freedom. This was much different from what Blacks wanted in the 1890s. At that time they wanted not to be killed while Blacks in the 1960s wanted merely to be able to sit with Whites at the same lunch counter. The approaches to these wants were different but not dissimilar. Both reactions where predicated on confronting evil and hatred with reason and dignity instead of reacting to it with violence.
“Ask yourself what the four or five most important ideas are that you have found while comparing the old document with the new.” I took my topic sports and found four things that really connected the two articles. I asked the question; in the end what is more important; money or the game? The idea of money and how that affects the fans, how it affects society, and the game. The idea of gambling and scandals that occur in baseball and how traumatic they are in effect to the game. How has this concept of money in baseball changed through the old document to the new document? For my synthesis I am taking the question; (In the end what is more important; money or the game?) and breaking my essay down into how the old document talks about money, and the new document talks about the game. The White Sox threw the series to gain money, and forgot about the game. Beane in the new document was going for the game looking at statistics instead of spending tons of money to win the series. Money was not an issue for him.
ReplyDeleteThe idea of a synthesis paper is to take two documents and not only look at how they compare but particular points make them similar. In my topic of Immigration both of the documents written by Jacob Riss and Sonia Nazario share the idea that immigrants are viewed negatively by society. In the old document Riss discuss how the wealthy class exploited the immigrants by not providing proper working and conditions. Riss focused on the the speficif conditions and how it affected the immigrants. Sonia Nazario in her document focused on why the new immigrants are still viewed negativelty and why they still migrate to the United States for a hopes of a better future. The way that immigrants are viewed has not change the only thing that has change is who are the immigrants and who are those looking down on the immigrants.
ReplyDelete@Sammy TestaI think is a good idea to have the question your asking in your synthesis to be two parts like that because it will allow you to be able to easily write and connect both documents. Are you going to pick a side of which you think is better or are you just going to to focus on the facts?
ReplyDeleteI agree with what you’re saying and I like that you’re asking the question “How do people view immigrants?” It is similar to mind as in we are both taking a concept of idea to compare the two documents with. You can write about how immigrants are view in each article and then see how this view has changed from past to present. I will take my question “In the end what is more important money or the game?” and see how my first document talks about money and how the second document talks about the game. I will then tell how the idea of money changed through the past or present. We both have a good concept of a synthesis and I like the building blocks for your essay so far.
ReplyDeleteI would like to give my opinion but are we aloud to in a synthesis paper?
ReplyDeleteIn your paper you really touch base on the different time periods. The two time periods had a lot of similarities but also a lot of differences. It is important to really understand the two different time periods before writing this paper. They were very different, but the main similarity for me is that during both periods of time racial segregation was a huge issue. However, Ida B. Wells’ situation was a lot more difficult than the freedom riders. Ida was an African American woman on her own stating the facts of the stories of lynching. She had to be very careful because if she would say or do the wrong thing there is a good chance that she would be lynched as well. Though, the freedom riders all had each other. They could stick together and defend themselves. Even though there were still a lot of African Americans who did not because they were scared of what might happen to them.
ReplyDeleteQ1) What comparison was made between the two documents?
ReplyDeleteA1) After reading "Dr. Lyte's Address to the Graduating Class," and reading "Hugh Herr's Commencement Address" with the old document in mind, I discovered that both artists shared the same purpose in their respective speeches: Motivation / Inspiration.
Q2) What is the new central idea between these documents?
A2) Therefore, my new idea for my 2 Synthesis Paper is how each speaker attempted to motivate or inspire their audience.
Q3) What is the revised comparison you now have that connects to the new idea?
A3) My new revised comparison will be between the message that each speaker presented, compared to the audience they delivered the speech to.
In response to Sammy Testa's most recent comment about opinion:
ReplyDeleteThe goal of the synthesis paper is to generate a new idea or concept. And that means, by all means, conjuring your own honest insight for the topics you are comparing. Since you have to think outside of the box for this new thesis, you could technically draw support from your own experiences to enforce your opinion. Just so long as you don't veer off track from your two documents obviously; remember that you have to use the material as your starting point.
In comparing the two articles on Crime and Punishment, the first on H. H. Holmes and the second on Ted Bundy, I came up with the question of: How has the view of a serial killer changed over time? The two articles are nearly one hundred years apart and though written with different objectives they both give insight into the view of the general populous’ and how they are effected by it. The article on Holmes was presented in the form of a newspaper written specifically to document on the findings in the interior of the Castle, the specific details are indicators of who would be reading and their knowledge on the topic. While the second article on Bundy gave a completely different spin setting out to prove the possibility of his innocence. In the same way the details used and words chosen were large markers that gave insight into the time period and audience.
ReplyDeleteThis post was an introduction into thinking about the synthesis paper. In terms of my own paper, the contextual information is similar. I found certain issues that Wells reacted to were mere survival situations, whereas the Freedom Riders wanted a social acceptance. Both drove for equality. Both for basic rights laid down in the Constitution. The Freedom Riders gave a new face to standing up against white supremacists.
ReplyDeleteThe main idea of this Synthesis paper is to juxtapose one piece of writing on top of the other to see the similarities and differences in style, audience, context, and subject(s). It is to make connections to one piece through the view of another.
@Jenna
ReplyDeleteJenna, your direction for this synthesis paper seems to be right on track and also very similar to what Dr. Archibald has said above. I would encourage you to explore more ideas that compare/contrast these two works. For example, what laws had been passed during and after Well's time that became hurdles for the Freedom Riders. I think expanding your conclusions in our synthesis paper will help in giving you a more rounded view of the topic.
@Alicia Whisler
ReplyDeleteI'm a little confused. Is your topic about race or were you just responding to Dr. Archibals' example? I feel like if you had stated your new idea a little more clearly or in the form of a question then there wouldn't be any confusion. Also I really like the way you explained synthesis in new terms; it honestly gave me a little more insight into it.
My topic is on Crime and Punishment and the two articles are about Holmes and Ted Bundy, who are both big serial killers for their time period. In my synthesis paper I am going to compare Bundy and Holmes and see how they were similar as serial killers. Like the fact that they were both smart people before they started killing. Also the fact that both Holmes and Bundy killed people into the double digits. Then I am going to contrast them as serial killers by showing how they were different and if their time periods have anything to do with it. One of the ways that Holmes and Bundy were different was that Bundy killed only women, but Holmes killed men, women, and children.
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ReplyDeleteI think what Marianna said about looking how the view of the serial killer has changed over the years is a great way to do the paper. The two different articles really help prove that the idea of the serial killer has come a long way from back when Holmes was killing people.
After looking at my two documents on the serial killers H.H. Holmes and Ted Bundy, I have found several points that tie both of the articles together. The article that I read on H.H. Holmes focused on his "murder castle" and how he committed the horrific murders. The article on Ted Bundy questioned whether or not he actually committed the murders. First, both men were well-educated, handsome, and charming. Neither of these men were ever suspected by friends or family of committing such terrible crimes. Second, both of the men targeted mainly women as their victims, sometimes even women they were romantically involved with. Third, although the men lived in different time periods, the time period they lived in had a lot to do with how quickly they were caught by authorities and what their punishment was. The different time periods had different ways of handling situations like this and different ways of punishing criminals. Lastly, both of the men had motives for the crimes they committed. Some of these motives included greed, jealousy, and resentment towards women. All of these motives initiated the killings. Both men also never showed remorse for the crimes they committed. Even though the articles describe two different serial killers during two different time periods, there are several concepts in the articles that tie them together. These points are key in understanding both serial killers and in creating the synthesis.
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ReplyDeleteI think the ways in which you are tying the two articles together is good. I think expanding on these points will really make for a great paper. I am going to focus more on the similarities between the two men and the two documents. I think by focusing on their similarities it will give the reader a clearer idea of the two documents.
@Rachel
ReplyDeleteI think this is a good start. It seems like there is alot of information on the similiraties and differences. This seems very interesting that one of these serial killers only killed women and the other targeted a wide range of people. I wonder if anything in these two individual's past has anything to do with what they did when they were older.
While comparing my two documents I found many important points, some that were similar and some different. One main point I found was that in the old document John Muir discusses the act of preserving the environment as if it were a simple act, however, in the more recent document it is clear that conserving the environment and putting an end to pollution has to be a global effort in which many nations participate in this effort. Another idea I found in the second document was that when dealing with many countries there is also the question of having to change cultures and eliminating major businesses that profit from harming the environment. A similarity that connected the two articles was that they both had a central individual or group of individuals who clearly felt strongly about a certain issue and influenced the field of ecology.
ReplyDeleteAfter looking over my two documents I have found similarities throughout the texts. In the first document they mainly look at Nast, and some of his cartoons. Mainly about the Tweed scandal. While the new document defused what the artist was actually thinking. In this case the artist is Mike Luckovich. A similarity is that they both depicted the characters that were the center of attention in the cartoon as funny, insulting but not disrespecting them, or exaggerated their physical features. Each artist used his artistic ability to get a point across, or get their point across. They both used cartoons as a way to legally, and in an attention grabbing way to get their thoughts out in the public to all types of viewers.
ReplyDeleteWhen I finished reading my documents about Charles Babbage and Steve Jobs, I found a couple of similarities between the two. The main concern is that they both saw a future in computers. Both Jobs and Babbage foresaw that computers would become and important part of society and maybe the most important piece technology ever made. Babbage started and founded the idea of computers. It was up to Job's to build off of it and complete Babbage's work. Jobs did this unintentionally, he built a computer in his garage and little did he know he was creating one of the biggest companies the world would ever see.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you described the characters in the cartoons and showed us who the artists were. On the other hand I would recommend that you focus more on depicting the cartoon. Show us how it specifically related to politics. We need to know the overall goal of the cartoons, how they effected society.
@Darren Kushto Darren you made good points. I think that it is innovative of Babbage to take a risk, and attempt at creating a wonderful piece of technology. Jobs did not give up on his idea, and completed it. Even if it was in his garage, he still built a computer. It is intuitive that he completed the computer, and helped a technological upheaval for generations to come.
ReplyDeleteI connected the two main articles given to me with the common association of money (with the scam being the main point of the confession and trading / salaries being the main point of "The Trading Desk") and wondered, does the fact that these players are paid, and oftenly in extraordinary amounts, detract from the social and cultural value of the sport itself? And if they were to be paid livable, more average salaries, would they players still even want to play baseball? Would people still take as much of an interest in the sport if the players weren't larger than life figures? I believe that all of these questions would be interesting to explore further in a paper.
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ReplyDeleteI think that comparisons between Bundy and Holmes would be a spectacular topic for a paper but it could probably go much deeper than simply that they were smart and killed a lot. Points that I think would be especially interesting comparing the precision, well planned out deaths that Holmes designed to the violent, quick deaths dealt by Bundy. Also a great topic for exploration would be the comparison of Holmes' and Bundy's trauma that incited their serial killing, with Holmes' being locked in a closet with a skeleton as a young boy and Bundy having been scorned by an ex-girlfriend. And finally, another point that could be contrasted is the difference between the intimacy of both of their killings, with Holmes rarely killing anyone by hand, and a majority of Bundy's deaths being by strangulation or stabbing.
The first step is to pick ideas from the old document and then pick ideas from the new document. Making connections between the two will lead to new ideas. In my old sports document I found the idea of the baseball system being a "dictatorship." Also the idea that money played such a huge role in the players lives. And lastly, the relationship between player and owner was not a respectful one. In the newer document I found ideas such as the league being more lenient(Free agency) but still having the dictatorship of the trade market. Again the theme of money trumps the story here. All the general managers care about is winning and money, and not the emotional welfare of the players. The relationship between players and managers/owners is somewhat also more lenient now that players(and agents) can bid up their worth. The main point between the two documents is the idea of how money, had once been the only thing holding teams together(or apart), is now no longer as oppressive on players and teams.
ReplyDelete@Sammy Testa While the old document does indeed talk more about money, the new document I think focuses on the busienss behind the team. It does mention the in's and out's of the game more then the previous but it takes the money theme and sort of side steps over to a business/game story.Beane was absolutely going for the game and winning, but only through money and meandering around was he able to do it. Money in the first document seemed like a wall, while money in the new document was more of a small hurdle.
ReplyDeleteMy two topics are the Teapot Dome Scandal and the Jack Abramoff Indian Gaming Scandal. These two topics are very similar, and very different. They are alike due to the amounts of money that was tossed around, they each had outside sources, and there were politicians that were involved. The amount of money that was used as bribes was millions of dollars for each of the scandals. Each scandal involved at least one outside source, for instance the Teapot Dome Scandal involved oil companies while the Gaming Scandal involved Indian tribe casinos, and each scandal had politicians involved such as cabinet members or congress members. The differences are the reasons for accepting bribes, how they did it, and the history behind the men who caused these scandals.
ReplyDelete@Scott Hyland Scott, you have many good points, like Darren said, and I also agree with Darren about going into more detail. I would like to add the suggestion of possibly adding a contrast between the two, you pointed out a similarity, it helps get your point across.
ReplyDeleteMy synthesis paper will be comparing a document written by John Muir on the Hetch Hetchy Valley and his struggle to save it from being dammed into a reservior. The second document, Shipbreakers, is the other article I read and it is about a beach in India where the breaking down of old ships is done. The articles were very different in the reasons for which ecology was a major component. They both had a major group and journalists that were fighting for them to be saved. In the second article much of the discussion was about the harm to the people and pollution of the environment, while Muir's article was more concerned with the preservation of a national park and its' landmarks. Also, in the Shipbreakers article the topic of how to prevent the need for this type of work to be done in developing countries was covered, especially referring to the actions of Greenpeace. This was not so much an issue in Muir's article as he believed everyone should feel the way he did about wanting to preserve the beauty of the Hetch Hetchy Valley. Another topic I will touch on in my paper is the role of the government in both issues. The government and those with power played crucial roles in both articles but in different ways. One way was the desire to acquire money and help a certain group of people and was more geared around utilitarian values and conservation. In the Shipbreakers article, the government became more involved when the nation was alerted of the harmful things that were happening on the beaches where the ships were being broken down and how western companies were involved in the exportation of toxic waste. The final topic I would like to cover that is a common theme between the two articles is commercialism, because in both there were commercial gains to be made from the reservoir and from the steel scrapped from the large ships in India.
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ReplyDeleteI agree with the similarities you found on the the two documents but I think it's possible for you to take them even further and find more similarities/differences. I'm not sure what the first document by Muir was that you read, but I disagree with what you said about the discussion of conserving the environment being a simple task. In the article I read it seemed like he had a difficult time convincing others to agree with him and in the end he didn't win his battle.
It is important to look at the similarities and differences of our documents to create a good synthesis paper. In this blog you compared what it was like for people that were in the era in which Ida B. Wells was alive, with the time period when Freedom Riders were around. You discussed what made the time periods different involving segregation and what made them similar.
ReplyDeleteIn my paper on the topic of health I am comparing how the health trends of dieting have changed over time and why changes have happened. I not only will look into the differences of how dieting has changed over time, but will also discuss how Kellogg’s views such as vegetarianism, are still looked into in today’s society.
@Jenna
ReplyDeleteI think that you are making very good points for the start of your synthesis paper. I like the connection that you are going to make concerning how Ida B. Wells and the Freedom Riders differ in the ways in which they went about fighting for the end of racial discrimination. Although they each wanted a change in society, they each had different ways of dealing with the racial issue because of the time periods they were from. This will make for an interesting paper and show good connections between your two documents.
In this assignment I am comparing an old document written by Charles Babbage with a newer interview with Steve Jobs. The level of technology and development differs so much between the two time periods in question, yet there are underlying similarities that are striking. Babbage and Jobs were both pioneering technologies that they saw having a revolutionary effect in the future. I thought they were also pretty similar on a personal level and in how they actually got started on their respective inventions. Of course, there are major differences too, particularly in how their projects panned out. According to the post, for my synthesis paper I will need to summarize the new paper in relation to the old and choose the main ideas to explore. For instance, I might explore the similarities in their initial foray into technology, how their ideas were accepted and what role the time period played, and the differences in how they both ended up and why. These would be some of the important points between the two papers.
ReplyDelete@Irene
ReplyDeleteYou bring up a good point that its only recently that we've realized it has to be a global effort to stop pollution. This is really important because a lot of poorer, developing countries will, over time, start having more cars and factories and such that causes pollution, but they probably can't afford to use newer green technology. The richer countries like the US will need to band together and share those costs if we want to save the environment. I think the topics you mention are very appropriate for your synthesis paper. Maybe you could include some ideas about what led to society's perception of environmental protection changing like it did.
Innocent blacks were being lynched when no one knew for sure if they were innocent or not.This shows that the documents were the same because Freedom Riders were not treated as equals just like people in Well's day. Another important idea is that Ida B. Wells really connected with the Freedom Riders in the sense that she herself faced problems in her life that reflected that of the Freedom Riders. For example, mobs got in the way of people during these times trying to create their own freedom. They used violence and sent innocent blacks to court. These show the basic ways of not only how the documents connect but how they connect to Well's life.
ReplyDeleteThe purpose of a synthesis is not to simply compare to two documents. Their similarities and differences. Instead a synthesis is about specific relations between documents and generating new ideas based on the similarities between several documents. Remembering to relate all Ideas created back to the documents it the tricky part. These papers are not about necessarily the content of the document but the ideas surrounding it. Such ideas of the audience or the expression of the content. A basic structure of this paper would be to compare the documents; express new Ideas found and conclude with a connection of the new ideas to the old.
ReplyDelete@Marianna Romejko I believe your question is an excellent one to ask. Do be careful as express the similarities between the documents and how it relays the similarities about Holmes and Bundy. I believe that is the type of paper Dr. Archibald is looking for. When reflecting on the first paper we had to write about on holmes. The paper was not about Holmes it was a bout the document,the era it was written and the audience it was trying to reach out to.
ReplyDelete@Jenna Jenna stated clearly that African Americans were scared during this time as to what could happen to them at any moment. Not only are we comparing and contrasting the documents we have to always refer back to our ideas. Jenna and I have the same when we both explained how blacks of Ida's time and the Freedom Riders were being treated unfairly and Ida was trying to put a stop to the this in a determined but "hush" sort of way.
ReplyDeleteA synthesis paper is not to compare two papers that have previously been written, but to find the similarity between the both of them. The paper that I have written was about the development of the machine gun. I have to link that somehow with Steve Jobs technical developments. I have a few ideas about how to link weapons and modern technology. Cyber warfare can be a good starting point. It is going to be a little difficult to make this happen. I will express some new ideas in the paper and link old technology and new technology to make a connection.
ReplyDeleteFor this assignment I will be comparing a speech given by John Muir and the article "Shipbreakers". Though both fall under the category of ecology, they are quite different topics. John Muir was all about preserving Yosemite and Hetch Hetchy Valley, as well as other national parks and landmarks. The article on Shipbreaking is about the demolition of ships once they become too old to use. Though they are very different under this one topic, there were a few similarities I've picked out so far, though I'm not quite done really diggin into it. First, there is a distinct group trying to help with each issue, though they are not too similar, they both play a huge role in the topic. During John Muir's time it was the Sierra Club, and in the shipbreaking article it was the Greenpeace. Another similarity I found was that these people used journalist to get the word out there about these specific issues and get the attention of the government so that help would be reinforced. I plan to further research into these two documents and pick out some more similarities for my paper still, but this is how I've started so far.
ReplyDelete@Shaina You really went into detail on this and I feel like your synthesis will be very well in detail! We seem to have somewhat picked out similar ideas for our paper. I think you're really on the right track for this because you've got quite a few of both similarities and differences to work with.
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ReplyDeleteTo further extend on Gabby's thought that the way immigrants are negatively viewed has not changed through the years. Being that I'm on the same topic as you I think I can lend a good hand. I belive you're going in the right direction but to go deeper you can specify wether or not the negative views towards immigrants were brought up for the same reasons as in the past and present.
For my topic of sports the biggest connection I found in both of the documents I read involved the aspect of cheating in baseball. In my paper I am going to shine light on the different ways cheating has manifested itself in baseball. While I talk the different methods of cheating I will give a brief history of what types of cheating are most common. I am also going to talk about why players choose to cheat and the affects those people who do cheat have on the game itself.
ReplyDelete@Sammy Testa Your concept of what is more important is a great idea for the paper. One idea that would in my opinion be a great addition for your paper would be what makes people want money over winning. Something along the lines of why has money had some much influence in baseball over the years
ReplyDeleteThe documents i plan to synthesize are both about economic scandal. My first document is about the Panic of 1907-1908. During this two companies almost ran the country into the ground without anyone realizing what was happening. My second document was about the recent recession in the United States. Major players in the stock market were betting on the collapse of the economy behind everyone's backs. In the sample post about Ida it talks about how white people where unknowingly to her reading her pamphlets. " They knew what was happening but what is not fully known is how her pamphlets were read by concerned Whites of the time." (par. 8) This connects to both of my documents as everything being done in both situations happened in secrecy.
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ReplyDeleteThe questions you pose about the common association of money are great questions to explore. They cover nearly all aspects of what you need to write about. Although you should also answer the question why. You could take your questions and go into greater detail by answering why.
For my synthesis the two documents that are being used are about economic tragedies in the U.S. One document is about the more recent economic downfall because of the banks using money that they did not have. The second document being used is about the Panic of 1907-1908 when the 2 largest companies basically drove the economy into the ground. In the blog it states how in different times things happen differently. "It is logical to assume that if Wells was present at a lynching and protested what was going on, she probably would have been lynched also. At the time Wells was writing, there were none of the most elemental safe guards for Blacks from those who would harm them. They only survived by being submissive."(par. 8)This connects to the documents because it shows how over time things change such as regulations or how the economy can be brought down by banks.
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ReplyDeleteI think that you could go very in depth with the whole secrecy thing and talk about how it was kept hidden or done behind peoples backs. With this idea you should also talk about how they keep all of their actions hidden.
Synthesis the combining of the constituent elements of separate material or abstract entities into a single or unified entity ( opposed to analysis, ) the separating of any material or abstract entity into its constituent elements. My first document was J.H. Kellogg’s view and techniques he used to encourage vegetarianism. The second document was on crash dieting. The common things are that both documents are promoting healthy eating. The main difference being that crash dieting you are not eating healthy. You are doing more things to hurt your body. The idea that you can get thin might seem good, but what happens to you body and organs while you are doing this can be irreversible.
ReplyDeleteThe paper was very informational and correct but after my comparison of the freedom riders and Ida B. Wells I found that the freedom riders had taken a more extreme by less violent route then Ida B. Wells who was very passionate and adamant against the people who were lynching others. But in the end your paper gives a good look at what so the the differences and similarities between the two are. There are more that enough comparisons but in the long run their ideas are less different and more of a follow up to the predecessor Ida B. Wells.
ReplyDeleteYou could also talk about how the machine gun durring its time was a increddible advancement in technology as well as the advancements that Steve Jobs made in the same field.
ReplyDeleteThe idea of a synthesis paper is to take two documents and compare them. In my topic local and mu history both of documents are speech that are inspiration. Hugh herr's commencement speech explains the tragic accident that happened to him. Also explains how he overcame the tragic accident. E.O lyte's commencement speech is about education of school.
ReplyDeleteThis synthesis paper is basically a summary of the comparisons you made from new document in terms of the ideas you already made in the old document. The comparison I recognized the most between my two documents were that Gloria Steinem and Lucretia Mott are feminists. They both had a passion for making women’s rights better. Even though they shared this ability to fight for what they believe in, they did have differences between them. One main difference is the time periods they lived in. For Mott there were a lot more problems for women’s rights unlike today for Steinem to deal with, but a main similarity is that this issue of women’s rights existed in both time periods. Also, you can tell their backgrounds and way of life are different as well when they went about changing these women’s issues.
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ReplyDeletePersonally overall, I like the topic she has and think it is interesting. Also, I really like the questions she composed to discuss her topic. They seem to tie in her documents very well. The way she is going about this paper, she is on the right track. Her documents seem to go together well.